Condo parkade gate suddenly not working!
Wait with everyone else to leave.
Read book to pass the time.
Wonder, will I make the appointment?
Call dentist office – inform of predicament.
Technician arrives! Solves problem!!! Cars go.
Yes, I did manage make it to my dentist appointment. Thank goodness.
I am so impressed with your six word lines. I played with that in my head and it was so hard! Your writing makes it sound effortless. And I love how it’s such a complete story with so few words. So fun to read!
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Thank you for your comments. I was struggling how to piece together a narrative of what happened, got frustrated, and decided to break it down into something manageable – 6 word chunks.
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What a fun way to tell a story. How lucky to have a book handy while you were waiting!
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I have the Libby app on my phone. I always have a book downloaded from my public library. It is a godsend while waiting in lines.
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I love the 6 words chunks. Sometimes a specific structure makes writing flow.
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That is a great way to tell the story! I love it. Nicely done! 🙂 ~JudyK
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